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For some reason the Parodyverse board has taken a dislike to Rhiannon's latest story and tells her she's forbidden to access /php/msgpost.php on this server. To read the story - which I think is Rhiannon's best work yet, and her first use of other people's Parodyverse characters, you'll have to follow the link below. Then come back here to reply, please.
After the War - a tie-in to the end of the Parody War
I should point out, by the way, that the help referred to from me in the titles refers to help getting the story on the internet. The only contribution I made to the actual content was the ruthless impostion of punctuation.
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This was an excellent story and a great deal of fun! For me, it was a real treat to read Teresa's account of the various stages of the Parody War. It added quite a fresh perspective to view it from someone that distant.
You also did a great job of conveying the fear that an invasion causes, as the attacks by the Avawarriors were tense and gripping. I've always liked the poetic use of Teresa's gifts, and there were some especially well described bits in here as she unleashed the potential around her.
You write PV continuity very well... I look forward to more!
