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Reply Subj: If only it was, but some of it seems to want to happen in additional chapters Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2016 at 09:56:32 am EST (Viewed 2 times) | |||||||
Quote: Quote: Very interesting developments. Quote: Explosive, even.Was it nuclear? Or conventional? Because there are conventions on these things. Quote: Quote: Really enjoyed the red text of the fighter pilots, I read it in their accents too. Quote: Never trust a man with a red accent.He seemed nice enough, just doing his job. I'm sure he's a good family man at heart and will return to his dutiful wife and snotty spawn to reflect on his role in robbing the Parodyverse of its premier heroes. Quote: Quote: Good to see Sorcy, and Xandar, and...oh wait now they're all dead. Quote: But you got to say goodbye.Nope, it was too quick for that! I did like the hint of friction with FA and Sorcy too. Quote: Quote: Interesting developments with Magweed too, addressing that well. Shame the Baroness was there to turn it all to s%^&!Quote: She was just cutting to the business.Ouch! You wound me. Quote: Quote: And, holy sub-plots, didn't expect that outcome! Quote: Which one?The Banjooooo one. I thought you sidelined no longer participating poster characters for a reason. Not that I mined, it was well done (if a little disconcerting for the amount of Banjooooo noodle given screen time). And oh look - the final chapter is up! *reads* Ah, you just wanted to write yourself having sex with Amnesia again didn't you? Nice way of doing it twice! Dirty old man. (jokes!) So it was old Wilbur after all, and he was after the Tomes. I should learn to trust my instinct on these things more. I guess I'm just so used to being blindsided by your devious plot twists that I've learnt not to. But wait...surely this doesn't resolve anything? How is this this end? | |||||||
