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Subj: Whereas mine are more "Oh $#@%&!!!" Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2016 at 08:48:55 pm EST (Viewed 959 times) | Reply Subj: My plans are usually more O Henry. Posted: Fri Dec 09, 2016 at 12:48:21 pm EST (Viewed 3 times) | ||||||
Quote: Funnily enough, EEE does happens to saunter into Chapter 2.So they did, and with some quite fun banter... Trouble certainly seems to be brewing as the world goes on planetary lockdown. (I wonder how that tastes to the Shoggoth...) Manman cleverly identified that something was wrong, and he an Knifey had a touching moment there as well. As always, the concern that the EEE crew have for their delivery people is inspiring, but they do come through in the nick of time. I did note that Al B. fluxuated with a Hal B. A few times there. Either that's a clever clue as to what's going on (too clever for me) or the Autocorrect might have run rampant through this chapter. Quote: Quote:Fun use of Lisa in her cosmic role! And nice to see that she cares. Also fun dialog between the Baroness and Otto. Looking forward to seeing where this goes and who is to blame! Isn't it spiffy? There are a few more pieces of the puzzle to lay out on the table before they are all assembled, but that's what the current story format is designed for. I'm enjoying these focused daily chapters, so the format works for me. And you're right... that is what spiffy is for, isn't it? | |||||||
