Tales of the Parodyverse - Plus there's the healthy radioactive steam bath.

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Subj: Plus there's the healthy radioactive steam bath.
Posted: Tue Dec 06, 2016 at 04:25:12 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)

Reply Subj: There are probably plenty of essential minerals in the shrapnel as well.
Posted: Mon Dec 05, 2016 at 07:54:43 pm EST (Viewed 560 times)

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I like the way that you're using the change in perspectives in this one, and how it shows a certain maturity setting in on each of the characters in turn. I was impressed with Kerry's ability to push through the current crisis. You had better give these kids a happy resolution... Admittedly, the fact that the dead one's perspective is next probably suggests good things there.

I've tried to skew the content to refelct the focus character each time, which has interacted with the plot to create more or less serious scenes. It;s been interesting to see how it turned out.

It became apparent the day before yeaterday that not all the Juniors would make it out unscathed, but until this morning I hadn't discovered what the scathing would be.