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Reply Subj: When Dancer gets back, she and I are going to have to give you a serious talking to! Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2016 at 07:50:24 pm EST (Viewed 1 times) | |||||||
Quote: You need to do right by that young lady, and killing her off isn't the kind of happy ending she deserves after all you put her through. Or killing her off again? I suppose that it is nice to see some resolution, rather than just leaving her a haunted, haunting spirit... But still.No, she's not just killed off. She's condemned to a slow sad destruction and erosion to oblivion in insane Herringcarp. That was her heroic choice. But... you did note that this was a two part story, right? Quote: I did enjoy revisiting the tomb under the mansion... Even if it is kind of creepy. And really, any time people travel down under the mansion, someone ends up dead. We should probably put up a caution sign or something. If I ever get back to another spurt of PV writing, a likely candidate will be the long-delayed Da Visionary Code storyline. I mean, it's not like you still need all those cast and characters, is it? Quote: I'm curious to see what the Baroness is after as well... Should be an interesting final chapter. There's some stuff I need to go back and add in to part two that in retrospect I should have covered. It's just marginally possible that this epilogue might spill into three parts after revision. I'll try to resist that, though. The problem (and fun) of Untold Tales writing is that every story logically spills into more stories without any effort at all. | |||||||
