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Subj: Re: 1 small note in regards to the Earth's Meatiest Hero.... Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2015 at 10:41:08 am EST | Reply Subj: 1 small note in regards to the Earth's Meatiest Hero.... Posted: Sat Dec 26, 2015 at 02:17:01 am EST (Viewed 717 times) | ||||||
Quote: Ham-Boy is not be able to do what is stated in the story. He can't use his "Meat Vision" to manifest Veal in anyway. Veal is outside the scope of his powers.I've corrected the meat product. You can infer that the creation took time and effort and gave HB a nose-bleed. Quote: BUT other then that: Good Job! I look forward to the next tale!The next bit is always the hardest - the conclusion! | |||||||
