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Manga Shoggoth

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HH still has his copy

Subj: Circles? Try Ellipses - big effects for a small change of focus.
Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 at 08:04:07 am EDT (Viewed 883 times)
Reply Subj: The secret is not to scuff the chalk circle.
Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2014 at 10:17:56 am EDT (Viewed 2 times)




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    Hope it holds up to the previous nostaligia-flavoured version.


Held up quite nicely, as a matter of fact. The only tweak that I spotted was the Barbarian (which still works well for the character in question).

I'm looking forward to part 2.




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