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Subj: I hoped so.
Posted: Wed Oct 03, 2012 at 12:28:58 am EDT (Viewed 564 times)
Reply Subj: Well written.
Posted: Tue Oct 02, 2012 at 06:28:30 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times)



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    Having spent a lot of time proofreading my own stuff recently, I couldn't help noticing the good ways of handlong dialogue and slipping in background story in this chapter. Mature technique, comes only with a lot of practice.


What's funny is I started doing that as an experiment during the new Supergirl fan-fiction story and bled it into other new stories because I liked the flow of it better than the straight-line conversational style.