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Subj: Re: and now to comment the story... Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 at 04:22:41 pm EST (Viewed 556 times) | Reply Subj: and now to comment the story... Posted: Thu Nov 10, 2011 at 03:29:15 pm EST (Viewed 3 times) | ||||||
Quote: That was...fantastic? funny?crazy?wonderful effort? It was a bizarre stream of consciousness. Probably not the kind of thing that I should show to anyone who could have me committed. Quote: This will teach me, how I dare to ask for years of parodiverse continuity...?Yes. I wanted to come up with something that would make the Vision's backstory look nice and simple by comparison. Quote: Its late in spain (I´m sleepy)..so I will post more comments and questions in the coming days...But just a few quick notes:I am glad Visi got such lovely family..he probably is a great father figure..and Hally...she comes across as an amazing morher.. fiercely loving..I´m happy for the cute cute kids and Dancer and kerry and Lisa...what a mix...I pity Visi at the same time that I am happy for him. And It is convoluated... It really is. I looked up a brief (no, really this time) story about Griffin that includes all three of his parents, has a good bit with Donar and even mentions Yo if you'd care to read it: http://www.chillwater.org.uk/HH/archive/others/2007/vizh%20-%20flight%20of%20the%20griffin.htm You get a feel for the parenting styles of all three there. That one happens during the Parody War. The kids have actually had a fair number of adventures on their own and with the Legion, in addition to their extended origin in the Mythlands. They've met Santa Claus, fought Nazi dinosaurs, and we've even seen stories set in the future after they've grown up. I wanted to make sure that they were old enough to be interesting as characters in their own right if I was going to introduce them at all. I think the one-shot that introduced them (posted long before Miiri/Hallie ever gave birth, oddly enough) is still my favorite story with them though. | |||||||
