Subj: Chance would be a fine thing... Posted: Sat Oct 29, 2011 at 01:21:21 pm EDT (Viewed 394 times)
Reply Subj: Admit it: the bittersweet ending to this (excellent) story is meant to goad Dancer back and write the sequel Posted: Wed Oct 26, 2011 at 08:28:27 pm EDT
As is always the case with my writing, please feel free to comment.
I welcome both positive and negative criticism of my work, although I cannot promise to enjoy the negative.