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Reply Subj: Reply to part 4... Posted: Sat Oct 09, 2010 at 03:09:51 pm EDT (Viewed 748 times) | |||||||
Quote: So, I was right in thinking of dreams.Indeed. Quote: I did laugh at the line HB said when he woke up. His "love life" will be a subplot in future issues of his own series.Excellent. Quote: I wouldn't mind seeing more interaction/team-ups between Ham-Boy & Alcheman they work well together.They're two of the more natural team players. Quote: As for an evaluation of how Ham-Boy did in the story:- Use of the powers: adequate. With a couple of special mentions for innovative uses. - Teamwork: adequate given that he had not worked with many of those involved before. He didn't actually stab anyone, which puts him up on others in the group. - Initiative: adequate given the situation he found himself in. CSFB! is going to mark him down for not "nailing the princesses". Quote: He could develop his inner-monologue more but all in all this outing was adequate. I'd give it a solid B, a good showing but there is room for improvement.Sounds good. | |||||||
