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Reply Subj: Some peculiar goings ons down below... Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 at 07:25:08 pm EDT (Viewed 1260 times) | |||||||
Quote: A fun and surprising chapter... So Liu Xi gets advice from the Celestian Madonna, even after leaping out of the family tree, eh? And what a family tree... Quite the impressive genealogy chart you added to the footnotes. I *think* I follow it... Although the fern's branch is a bit disturbing.It took me longer to compile the chart than to write the story. And even then I had to miss off whole branches, such as the Hooded Hood's various relations past and present and the House of Shepherdson. I bet Miiri could do one though. Quote: Those were some impressive changes for Alcheman. No wonder he earned a couple of captive princesses. I'm looking forward to understanding this curse a bit more.Shrike originally wrote Ivan Strode, the guy who gave Alcheman the tattoos, as kind of occult-sleazy and working to a deeper agenda. If Shrike doesn't want to explore that then I'll probably fold something into the upcoming Camellia Gambit. Quote: Wow... Those are quite the damning quotes from Sally... Not much chance it's a coincidence. Perhaps we know where Laurie's spirit has gone...Sally's reliving her greatest guilts, her darkest secrets. Quote: Good stuff! Hopefully the newbies can regroup and not hold grudges for what's been going down.It's going to be an interesting post-game evaluation. | |||||||
