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Subj: Really, doesn't that amount to a comment on Part 5? Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 at 02:30:11 pm EDT (Viewed 2 times) | Reply Subj: Part 2 & 3 Posted: Mon Sep 13, 2010 at 05:38:30 am EDT (Viewed 2 times) | ||||||
Quote: You are doing a good job of outlining all the powers and skills and personalities of the new team members. This makes for a good introduction to them all (for those that haven't been paying attention). That's part of the point. I'm also trying to explore them myself. Quote: And, while I can see the reason you chose to have them all undertake this journey without the rest of the team I do look forward to the whole cast coming together. I'm trying to milk the situation for all it's worth and get a series of "first nights". Quote: I am surprised that Al B. didn't jump at the chance to explore a new place. Unless he's riding shotgun on Hatty's shoulder Hank Pym micro style.Al's busy. See later this chapter. Quote: It was nice to see Mumph and Yuki teamed up too! I don't recall them working as a duo before so it was about time. | |||||||
