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Subj: The tab question wasn't answered, so it may not be as sweet as it seems Posted: Mon Jul 05, 2010 at 12:27:49 am EDT (Viewed 471 times) | Reply Subj: I'm already jealous of their headquarters... Posted: Sun Jul 04, 2010 at 08:24:39 pm EDT (Viewed 514 times) | ||||||
Quote: I mean, an intergalactic zoo is nice and all, but then I've never actually found where in the mansion it was supposed to be. Even so, who wouldn't rather bowl a few games instead of shoveling out the cages of some blue "Avatar" critter?I dunno, Flapjack might enjoy that, you never know with that guy... Quote: Lots of fun dialog in this chapter... I really liked the Hatty/Dream discussion that framed things. I had forgotten about the GG team... I liked that Hatty laid out some differences between the teams. I also thought that Dream's reasons for putting PAPG on ute AL instead were well thought out.To be honest, I forgot about them too until I was writing this chapter. I then realized I needed to come up with a reason for the two teams to be different, otherwise the AL would be redundant and I'd have to revamp them. I also realized that the Who's Who has an out of date name for PAPG (it has her listed as Cinnamon Rain and as I think about it now she's been called Gwendolyn something or other for awhile now) so I have to get that sorted out. Quote: I, too, would find it odd dealing with Anvil Man out of costume. And I naturally enjoy the team's choice of psychologist...I thought you would. I'm basically using Harely Quinn as my inspiration when writing her, I'm assuming that'll work. Quote: Looking forward to more!Glad to hear it! ~Hat~ | |||||||
