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Subj: Re: It would have worked either way... Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:45:02 pm EDT (Viewed 388 times) | Reply Subj: It would have worked either way... Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 at 11:29:54 pm EDT (Viewed 429 times) | ||||||
Quote: It worked well in the completed version, but you also could have interspersed the two types of scenes too.One of the reasons I switched was I didn't want to create a whole military troop that we'd never see again. I also didn't want to contradict what happened in the Moderator Saga, and that is a LOT of research to do. It was easier to switch it up to the first person style, and in the end I thought it put out a better product. I was debating interspersing some scenes of the Machine Shop and Glitch throughout to break it up, but I approached this as a stand-alone chapter (that you might see between 2 story arcs in a comic series) that can also help enhance the current plot. ~Hat~ | |||||||
