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Subj: The other three parts are.
Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 at 09:26:49 am EDT (Viewed 3 times)
Reply Subj: Hey... that's not unfinished at all!
Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 at 08:41:09 am EDT (Viewed 378 times)

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It's actually a really great little character piece, and I especially like the way it fleshes out more of Marie through her reactions to the Caphan and their mirrored challenges to adapt. Plus, who doesn't like fresh flowers in a room?

As I mentioned to Jason, I fear I yanked continuity out from under this one with my own efforts on the Caphan's literacy. That sucks. Especially since it robbed the board of the opportunity to imagine the faces down at the paper's complaints department.

This was really intended to be the start of a whole road-trip mismatched-buddy type plotline that ended up with the girls battling sleazy criminals in GMY before heading home.

One's a green-skinned alien pleasure slave. The other's a resurrected Victorian banshee. Together they solve crimes.