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Subj: It could probably have used a villain or three... Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 at 02:19:25 am EDT (Viewed 2 times) | Reply Subj: I love a happy ending! Posted: Fri May 21, 2010 at 09:54:14 pm EDT (Viewed 372 times) | ||||||
Quote: I'm not cleaning that bus, by the way. I'm not *that* charitable.Isn't that what you have children for? Dang - Al B. should have used that line in the story... Quote: You know if Dancer was around to read this, it would turn into some 20+ part round robin somehow. There would be romantic entanglements, and lessons learned. Yeah. We miss you Dancer! Hope you're doing ok. Quote: Still, even as a one chapter story, I feel it was epic as is. Especially if we assume the bus is the infamous melancholy omnibus from the early BZL. That was a bus that could make a hobo feel like royalty.It very well could be. | |||||||
