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Reply Subj: Some very potent stuff here Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 at 08:24:30 pm EDT (Viewed 8 times) | |||||||
Quote: I was especially affected by the loss of Tera. It speaks well of your writing that I care enough about her to be shocked at her sudden demise and to feel gut-punched by the twist.I'm pretty sure I stole the trick of getting the reader invested in a character like that from you, so really it speaks well of your writing. Quote: So now the Abandoned Legion is outed. The LL are going to find pretty soon that there's a "Sersi" and a "Premiere" knocking about - and a fake Hatman again. Trouble will follow - and should.And importantly, the Abandoned Legion is outed, "officially" linked to the Lair Legion, and responsible for the destruction and death in GMY. It's all a part of the plan. Quote: Proceed.Proceeding. I think I'm going to maybe tie things a little looser to UT than I've been doing because I'm finding occassionaly that I've handcuffed myself (for example, I couldn't get G-eyed in because I set this story during his time in Faerie with Alcheman). ~Hat~ | |||||||
