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Reply Subj: Re: Widening Reply... Posted: Mon May 10, 2010 at 06:33:06 pm EDT (Viewed 330 times) | |||||||
Quote: Quote: The Hood benefits either way, whether Faite is troubled or grateful.Quote: Faite doesn't think of the Hood as her enemy, so she doesn't really mind if he benefits. She's only irritated when he purposely gives her extra work to do, because she feels he should know better.As an archvillain the Hood is eventully everybody's enemy. I have to keep reminding myself of this. Quote: The hard part of her new task is trying to integrate it with what she is, and what she's capable of. She sees that not as a failure, but as part of the challenge. That's also why she wouldn't even stop the Hooded Hood from using it to his advantage - it's part of the experience of understanding.I didn't raise the points to try and stymie your storytelling, of course. I mentioned it because it seemed to me that there were dramatic opportunities inherent in it. | |||||||
