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Subj: Thanks. I like my plots but I haven't been as happy on the technical end...maybe I'm just being too critical of myself! Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 at 09:40:43 am EDT (Viewed 599 times) | Reply Subj: You're doing a really excellent job of juggling plot threads, detailing fight scenes and distinguishing different personalities here. Posted: Wed May 05, 2010 at 12:10:34 am EDT (Viewed 565 times) | ||||||
