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Location: Seattle, Washington
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HH thought this was a good story, and technically one of the best written you've done

Subj: Maybe. *text inside*
Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 at 02:06:24 pm EDT (Viewed 507 times)
Reply Subj: Some great extensions to IOL mythology here.
Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2010 at 01:46:40 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times)


Really this is me just trying to work around the vagueness of Lee's background. In the last story, I didn't mention where the Bookman family burial site was since I'm not exactly sure where Lee is from. Certain hints over the years have said Earth while other hints say elsewhere. In this story I skirt the issue of who's Lee was pre-IOL, something that has never really been brought up in story. I've had some ideas about it but haven't thought up anything concrete so I slightly avoided it.

As for this story being "technically one of the best written" I've done I'm not sure how to respond to this. The Worm scene has been a scene I've had on my computer for some time (couple of years). David is not a new concept just one I've finally figured out of how introduce. The Worm scene was part of a bigger story, one where Lee was still alive & included the Legion (to show how old it is Trickshot was still a member of the Legion at the time). The Legion part of the story would be David's first meeting with the team. His actually meeting with the Legion will be presented later but I do have a scene where David almost meets the Legion which most like will be in his next story or the one after it.