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Reply Subj: But is it Change we can believe in? Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2010 at 08:48:11 pm EDT (Viewed 7 times) | |||||||
Quote: Another excellent episode. I liked the trips to Herringcarp. You did a nice job showing how unpleasant a fellow the Hooded Hood can be with his conversations with Amnesia and (especially) Icy. I don't like the Hood to become too cosy and avuncular. At the moment I feel he needs to remind people of his sharper edges. And given that he's still sore about having to sacrifice Zdenka there's even reason for the less-nice Hood to be in evidence. Quote: The fight between Ham Boy and MLA was well done. Who knew meat could be such an effective weapon?Actually I'll need to go and edit it since L! had some quite extensive notes about what was wrong with the way HB used his powers. Quote: Hatty seems to be intruding on Vizh's niche as the man with the world's most dangerous rolodex, but since he can actually bust a few heads even without his powers, I'm guessing he won't use it with his showdown with the Frightsome Four.I'm getting semi-autobiographical there because what Jay's doing with the Foundation is a kind of distilled, amped-up version of what i do for a living. And there's a wish-fulfillment element too; I wish I could be as effective and immediate as he is atb tackling the problems. On the other hand, I'm rearely targetted for actual assassination as a result of my endeavours. Quote: I'm at a loss as to who Garrick could be visiting. Or who the next LL liasion will be. Or who's due to become the next Champion of Order. But I'm definitely looking forward to finding out.I'll try and write some today. I've also receieved tie-in material from a couple of people that I'll need to work in. Finally, a question I've been meaning to ask you: [spoilers blacked out here] Are you still happy with the membership we discussed, or would you prefer to have someone else in there - say Kambyon? | |||||||
