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HH
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killer shrike

Subj: Re: Part Two comments
Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2010 at 04:07:08 am EDT (Viewed 2 times)
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Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2010 at 05:35:57 pm EDT (Viewed 2 times)



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        I really loved this chapter. The description of the Jet Starscream Experience was great, and the identity of the MLA was a treat. The introduction of Lady Gdaya was great. I bet she's got quite the Poker Face.

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        Credit where it's due: L! sent me quite a description of the Jet Starscream Experience which I'll probably add as a footnote sometime. Donar e-mailed me with information about Lady Gdaya - including her name.



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    One of the great possibilities of having a dramatically redone LL team is that we'll get to see supporting characters and villains like these get more of the spotlight.


I was reluctant to commit to a new team with new subplots that would require a regular run of stories to properly follow through. I'm still unsure, given that board activity seems to be... variable. But assuming I can find the time to write and readers can find the time to reply I think the new line-up will have some fun possibilities when it fionally gets here.


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        Icy's departure was especially moving. It looks like we're about to see another noble soul get tempted into a bargain with.... the Hooded Hood.

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        Could be. The Hood does get to dominate parts of the next section.



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    So he's picked up a few things from Lisa then.


Who hasn't?


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        Looking forward to Hatty versus the League of Losers, Ham Boy meating the MLA, and CSFB!'s showdown with General Hodgekiss.

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        I've just got to write four reports before Monday and I'll be right on it.



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    *cracks the whip*


Well here we are on Monday and two of them are done now.


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    Oh, and since you mentioned it in another reply, I did notice CSFB! has adopted his sister's colors. It should be interesting to see if this just a temporary change based on his mood or something more permament.


In many ways this is CSFB!s story. It was meant to be a one-parter but now it's sprawled into a trilogy.