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Subj: Thank you. It's been a long time since I wrote anything of length, and longer since I finished one. Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 at 09:55:14 am EDT (Viewed 570 times) | Reply Subj: Tremendous stuff Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 at 06:39:20 am EDT (Viewed 5 times) | ||||||
Quote: A rollicking conclusion filled with action (the griffin/wyvern aerial battle), intrigue (the revelation of the mastermind behind the entire caper), shock (Griffin's transformation), and information (Gina's lesson to Hemlock about forest fires). I had written many, many bits of this second half of the story before, and then had to spend the weekend trying to get them all to link up without way too much exposition and clunky transitions. Not sure I'm thrilled with the results, even after cutting some minor things that just wouldn't fit, but the bits I still like. | |||||||
