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Subj: He might have requisitioned a child at some point. Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 at 09:48:47 pm EST (Viewed 417 times) | Reply Subj: The biggest shock in this story is (spoiler) managing to reproduce Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 at 04:33:11 pm EST (Viewed 6 times) | ||||||
Quote: An excellent and engrossing first chapter. Griffin seems to have his father's knack for getting into trouble and one mother's eye for detail. From his interactions with Miss Garrick it seems he hasn't inherited his other mother's charms, though the story isn't over yet.Well, it's possible that the Garricks are just notoriously hard to charm, but I admit Griff isn't putting his best foot forward so far. Quote: And what a story it is. I quite liked the little history lesson of the National Park located in Kansas and am eager to learn why after all these years trees have begun to take root.Thanks! I had to do some research to find a forest that was a bit unusual (this was originally started for forest week way back when), and that little snippet of history got my imagination going. Quote: Looking forward to the next bit. It's ready to go once this gets some more replies. | |||||||
