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Reply Subj: No rabbits were harmed in the making of this episode. Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 03:14:12 pm EST (Viewed 3 times) | |||||||
Quote: Quote: Enjoyed this a lot! I'm liking the Lost Legion - they really don't get along at all, but they get the job done. ManMan's moment was great. Enjoyed G-Eyed and Nats bickering at each other once more, though I wonder if they'll ever get over their differences. Hatman's "turn" at the end was quite creepy, and I'm eager to see its impact on him and the others.Quote: I'm seeding plenty of threads that can be picked up in some subsequent chapters and reminding readers of some of the underlying issues, tensions, and backstories that we haven't dusted off for a while.I can't help but feel that if I hadn't vanished from the board for a while there, you wouldn't need to do so much dusting. (And I'd be afraid of G-Eyed heading back into the pain chair in retribution, but that'd probably wind up happening either way.) I'm quite enjoying it, and I'm very interested to see where things go from here. Even if that includes a pain chair or two. Quote: Quote: These daily updates are making me feel incredibly lazy. But I did write some more today. That's worth something, right?Quote: Absolutely. If you read the penalty clause on your PVB writing contract you'll see that means you could keep up to half of a kidney.I'd better get a move on, then - or else I'll be finishing this story while hooked up to a dialysis machine. | |||||||
