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Reply Subj: Part 5 comments Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 at 04:41:57 pm EST (Viewed 513 times) | |||||||
Quote: This chapter was a real treat. You've assembled most of my favourite Legionnaires (seriously, there isn't a single character that I don't like on the Lost Legion line-up) and they still have pretty darn good teamwork considering how long it's been since they worked together last; really I don't know if all of them have even been on a mission together before now (I'm thinking of Sorceress and dull thud, but I could be wrong). Many of them have worked together a lot. A few are real pros, veterans really. Even newbie Alcheman is usually depicted as a sensible team player. For a acratch team they did okay. Quote: Excellent strategy utilizing the Happy Place, though I'm not sure if any of those injuries that occurred will have lasting effects or not; I don't know if we've ever seen a Happy Place to Happy Place transfer like that before.I guess the second Happy Place scenario trumps the first one. I'm not even sure if the actual heroes were taking those lumps in Flay and Skinner's vision. Quote: Also enjoyed the tale from Zdenka's point of view. When she was created originally I doubt you thought she'd be this embedded into plotlines in the Parodyverse this far along (feel free to correct me if I'm wrong here). I didn' expect to still be writing Parodyverse stories this far along. Quote: Excellent job sir!If you browse some other feedback on this chapter you'll see that a couple of folks were concerned about Hatty's killing of the bad guys and whether it would affect him since it's not his usual style. If you have any comments feel free to make them here of via e-mail. | |||||||
