Tales of the Parodyverse - You are a brilliant father and the best one for me.

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HH is a tough father to have if you're an aspiring writer

Subj: You are a brilliant father and the best one for me.
Posted: Wed Mar 03, 2010 at 08:00:59 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)

Reply Subj: Good second draft, correcting the errors and omissions of the first while retaining the emotion. Well done.
Posted: Tue Mar 02, 2010 at 12:20:02 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)

Nice use of Molly Tillinghast. I notice Aella comes ever closer to interacting with the mainstream Parodyverse. This should be interesting.

I've got two directions I could go in and at the moment I'm still weighing up which would take Aella more in the direction I want her to go in (and which she'd choose).