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Subj: Well, I'm trying to get a little action back on the board. Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 02:21:08 pm EST (Viewed 16 times) | Reply Subj: Ahhh! It's a multi-parter! Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 at 12:42:21 pm EST (Viewed 1611 times) | ||||||
Quote: I liked the alternate point of view of the fight. Sometimes second-hand observation can make something that happens quickly more interesting.There's a lot of stuff to get through in this chapter so I'll need every trick I can muster to make it vaguely interesting. Quote: Either Chiaki knows she ruined the game by dying, and whoever is controlling this wouldn't really allow it; or Chiaki's "I have to die" statement was a prediction and not a plan; or she knows the Hooded Hood or Faite are involved somewhere but she can't get to them unless she dies first - kind of an escape mechanism where there is none.We'll certainly see later in this chapter. Quote: For a small FYI aside, as a samurai Chiaki isn't too afraid to die if it's necessary, and she feels she lived a pretty good life so far. What gives her a fear of dying is she feels that quite a few people emotionally depend on her, and she doesn't want to hurt them.Indeed. I suspect she felt a responsibility to the three women with her in thier current predicament too. | |||||||
