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Subj: Probably better than the consequences of not struggling anyway.
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 at 12:12:57 pm EST (Viewed 2 times)
Reply Subj: A beautifully written struggle, with intriguing consequences!
Posted: Sun Feb 21, 2010 at 08:17:25 pm EST (Viewed 510 times)

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Some very evocative writing here in the ebb and flow of the storm against the shore and Aella's struggles against it. I'm definitely interested to see where the story goes now that she finds herself tossed back to civilization...

I've had this chapter in my head for as long as the concepts been floating about, far longer than I've actually been writing this stuff. Years back when Alex still took swimming lessons but I didn't I'd spend the time in the main pool which had waves every so often, my favourite game was trying to get out of the water while the waves were on so I gad a basis for what that would be like to write from.