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Quote: Quote: Quick note: is Hatman supposed to be in the original vision of the LL's dinner? I'm assuming not, since he's mentioned as being MIA, yet he's one of the heroes to attack the CarnifexQuote: Nope, it was a error. Now it's fixed. But you have to explain the boo boo to win a no-prize.Hallie created a hologram of Jay to mess with the Carnifex's mind? Quote: Quote: Quite an enjoyable story. I was a bit surprised by how the Legion found out the Carnifex was more than he seemed. I really don't recall Flapjack witnessing that earlier exchange between Mark and Doorman, and assumed the Caphan prophetess would play a larger role in his outing.Quote: He spotted it in an epilogue of Saving the Future. Vespiir's whereabout in the eight hours before the fight have yet to be revealed.Fair enough. Quote: Quote: The scenes from a dead planet were well done. It will be interesting to see how they get out of their situation, especially given the apparant first step in Chiaki's plan.Quote: The danger is that that situation will overshadow the others.Well, they all seem to be equally omnious, though the EEE staff tends to be a bit more flippant in how they deal with catastrophic situations, so it just seems like they aren't in deep doo doo. Quote: Quote: EEE, as always steals the show with their scene. Inluding one of the Bonsai Kittens was a nice touch.Quote: I was tempted to include all three.Why didn't you? Cody wouldn't have minded, I'm sure, unless there's a problem with stray hairs on the sheets. Quote: Quote: And I'm quite interested in reading how HH and Hatty assembled this Lost Legion that's about to put the wood to Misters Skinner and Flay.Quote: Well, perhaps there are some tie-in stories to be written.If you can get tie-ins from most of those surprise guest stars I will be more impressed than I usually am with your efforts. | |||||||
