Subj: Re: Nice bit of dread there at the end... Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 at 11:42:14 am EST
Reply Subj: Nice bit of dread there at the end... Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 at 12:41:41 pm EST (Viewed 456 times)
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I enjoyed the tale, especially the way the pumpkin-devil's oversight allowed the boys to turn the tables, and hint at the end of a vengeful fire waiting to return. Personally, I would plant a lot of pumpkins on that ground to keep that witch buried. Maybe some zucchini too. Once zucchini starts growing, it never seems to run out... it's pretty mystical in its own right.
Good job!
Thanks for the review this is my first story posted up so im thrilled you and others like it