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Subj: Sometimes its better to let those emotions out Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 at 01:55:53 pm EDT (Viewed 2 times) | Reply Subj: With his physique, the Kiwi should really watch his blood pressure. Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 at 09:32:11 pm EDT (Viewed 431 times) | ||||||
Quote: A great collection of scenes and characters this chapter. My favorite was the interplay between the three heroes of the story. Aegis certainly has a finely honed sense of when to stay out of a conflict...He's no dummy. Quote: You've always had a flair for villain characters, and the pair that bookend this chapter are no exceptions. I enjoyed the Kiwi's tantrum, and it contrasts nicely with the chilling assassin Aotako.I almost scrapped the last scene because it was too grim and also it repeats a lot of stuff in the Kiwi scene, right down to the exotic pet. Quote: Plus, swimsuits all around next chapter! What more could a reader ask for?An action sequence or two would be nice. And at some point I need to get Silver Aegis in his super suit. Its been like 8 chapters. | |||||||
