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Subj: Ooooooooo, look at Mister Fancypants! Posted: Sun Aug 30, 2009 at 05:54:20 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times) | Reply Subj: Beats most country club dinners I've been to. Posted: Tue Aug 25, 2009 at 03:45:12 pm EDT | ||||||
Quote: A fun chapter, from the valet parking to the last dance of the evening (or first, I suppose.) The Kiwi of crime is suitably disgusting, and I look forward to seeing him get his greasy come-uppance, although I fear it might not come within this story. Probably not. Quote: I especially liked the script to the comic that closed the chapter (although the shrinking text was a bit problematic.) Really well done!The comic script was meant to be a change of pace from all the flashbacks and exposition in the previous chapters. Now that the key characters are up to speed, the story can move forward (if I get my six replies, that is). | |||||||
