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Reply Subj: Ha! I think we can make an exception on the start date for such a good opening chapter Posted: Mon Aug 03, 2009 at 05:35:45 am EDT (Viewed 3 times) | |||||||
> Fantastically fun stuff. The pacing was excellent - and if you intended the drop bear reference to have me laughing out loud well it worked. Excellent. I particularly enjoyed the scenes dealing with the LL'ers responding to the call for action (Dancer, Librarian, MS and Visionary). It seemed appropriate to show the team coming together. it was just a matter of finding an interesting (and brief) way of doing so. Very much looking forward to the next part and finding out what nefarious villain is responsible for this. Part two's now in the shops. | |||||||