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Reply Subj: A griping, illuminating chapter! Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2009 at 07:36:35 pm EDT (Viewed 659 times) | |||||||
Quote: I was just thinking of this series yesterday, and here a new chapter comes out! That's service. Today, I shall think about winning the lotto...I'm not entirely sure it works like that. You tend to require a ticket. Quote: Very well done, by the way... the race from the house to the beach (or oh-so-close-to-it) was thrilling and scary, and the villain suitably terrifying. A well done tragic moment setting up our heroine! I look forward to reading more...It's a story that's taken an extremely long time to get quite right, for some reason it just finally clicked. | |||||||
