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Subj: One day we'll have to pick a few up. Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 at 05:43:34 am EDT (Viewed 5 times) | Reply Subj: Quite a lot of names dropped in this story Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 at 11:45:28 pm EDT (Viewed 6 times) | ||||||
Quote: Some familiar, others not so much. {/q]A few of them are just laced there for when/if I finally get into showing more of Vinnie;s family life. I've been planning a reunion dinner for some time now. Quote: I quite enjoyed the snatches of conversation overheard at the start of the story as well as Shoggoth's conversation with the Flensing Man.That was really the starting point for this chapter and the reason why it over-ran so badly. Soulshredder's reference to Dancer's (accidental) adventure into genocide was a nice touch, though you would think by now the villains would figure out the best chance of seducing Dancer would be when she's not on her feet. Isn't that true of most women? Quote: Looking forward to the next part.I'm gradually working my way towards writing it this morning. Maybe after breakfast. | |||||||
