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Subj: Anything that can complicate the writing and I'll do it. Posted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 at 06:40:06 am EDT | Reply Subj: Nice job of working *spoiler* into things! Posted: Fri Apr 10, 2009 at 06:08:16 pm EDT (Viewed 577 times) | ||||||
Quote: A fun chapter! I've always liked the Al and Yuki pairing, as they compliment each other nicely, and get each other into trouble just as well. As others have noted, nice use of bits from continuity... not just for this part, but for the whole story so far. That's always been a hallmark of Untold Tales, and this story seems geared especially well for such showcasing.It wasn't meant to be that major. The plot took a swerve when Bill stopped participating again and I decided to shift the emphasis, and a wider cast tends to make the story longer and more complex. Right now I'm way bogged down in the situation I've got Shep and Shoggoth in and that's really holding me up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! It would be nice to have one. I sat down to write it just now but domestic disputed have again intervened. I'm writing this with gritted teeth. | |||||||
