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killer shrike
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CrazySugarFreakBoy!

Member Since: Sun Jan 04, 2004
Posts: 1,235
Subj: while I'm just surprised
Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 at 03:50:38 pm EST
Reply Subj: Glad to see this continue. :)
Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 at 01:58:01 am EST (Viewed 508 times)


> You've done alright by my characters. I suppose Iris would get cranky eventually, and Bettie would definitely not see the need to wait for "the boys" to come to the rescue.

That's what I was shooting for.



> Flapjack is always on the make, and Griffin's psyche-out of Kambyon would meet with Dream's approval.


I wanted to give Griffin a moment where he just didn't stand there like a passive idiot and listen to Kambyon ramble, but I also didn't want a scene where the child outwits the adult. So this was the compromise.



> Interesting that Kambyon is so quick to dismiss other people's conceptual titles, just before trumpeting his own.


He's a villain, and as such entitled to be a hypocrite.



>If he meets Dream, I suspect Dream will introduce himself as "Lord and Master of Ball Cheese," just to rub it in.


Ew! Rub it in what?


> The drawing of parallels between Griffin and Kambyon was enlightening

I liked the idea of a kid who wants to be a "monster" meeting an actual "monster", which is why I set the story up to lead to this particular conversation. Originally it was going to be a lot longer, but I reigned myself in.