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killer shrike
Subj: Re: A good continuation Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 at 02:29:28 pm EST (Viewed 587 times)
Reply Subj: A good continuation Posted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 at 12:40:21 pm EST
> The descent into the caves was very well written, and I like how you handled the story's guest stars. Greye's pick up line made me chuckle. > > Looking forward to finding out what it is, how it got there and where its supposed to be.