> First impressions are important... it's clearly something we at the Legion take seriously.
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Yes, they do.
> This was a lot of fun, and I liked the nods to the old plaque banner, and Flapjack's portrait.
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I was wondering if anyone was going to pick up on that.
> The "average" citizen's view of the mansion was well done, and I liked Catherine's hesitation and nervousness in dealing with the team.
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I think anyone would be.
> Nice of Lee to come to her rescue so quickly... I'm curious to see what they have to discuss, and to learn more about Mr. Spooky,
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This point is actually the weak part of the story, I haven't really figured out that but something will be said.
>as well as to see if more guest stars show up.
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I have at least one more member of the Mansions' staff show up. I have ideas for a few members of the team to show up or be mentioned.
> Looking forward to more!
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I started to write more so it should be up soon. I was going to have this part be longer but I thought I'd cut it up so that we could have some story posts on the Board.
