Tales of the Parodyverse - Then the chapter did its job.

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Subj: Then the chapter did its job.
Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 at 01:21:38 pm EDT

Reply Subj: I'm looking forward to seeing those gloats shoved back down his pie hole.
Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 at 05:40:26 pm EDT (Viewed 515 times)

> Intolerable, twisted little weasel... He really, really needs to get what's coming to him. And it's definitely not a honeymoon.

Well, I heard that Enormous Irma was single again.

> This was, I thought, a clever way to frame all of the exposition needed to bring the story about to its big finish. Sure, it was mostly monologing, but self-aware enough to play well. Plus, we finally see just how rotten to the core this villain truly is.

We need to bring this thing home somehow, so I was willing to resort to drastic narrative measures.

> The trap for Kerry was certainly a new application for babies... which, when one thinks about it, don't have a great number of immediate uses. Still, that's about as warped a trap as I've seen.

They're quite good for scaring birds.

> It was also good to finally see Liu Xi and Danny make their move, and open the door to the retribution that the V.S. so richly deserves. Thanks for letting me get a lick in... I needed that. And an excellent quote to go out on.

I expect things will get a little bit vigorous next issue. Feelings are running high.

> I look forward to the next bit immensely! I hope the writing of it goes smoothly...

Me too.