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Subj: I hardly ever have to invade anyone these days.
Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2008 at 02:19:08 pm EDT
Reply Subj: Well then Mission Accomplished! And not in the George Bush way.
Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 at 03:34:11 pm EDT


> So the extent that the gang is back together is pretty well established by the opening scene, which shows that not only have the Helicarrier and the mansion hooked up, but they've found Yo and Maggie too. I had some plans on dealing with Hallie's reintroduction to the kids, but I can build off of this scene and incorporate them easily enough.

I left a few gaps both because I wanted to move this to closure and in the hopes that others might feel encouraged to cover the key meetings.

> I liked the "curing" of Al, especially when his failed attempt to fake it was rooted out... I wondered why he seemed to be so cooperative about the whole thing. He's a tricky one. I still have an Evil Al/amnesiac Hallie scene to include as well.

That sounds like great fun.

> Garrick's solution to the Cromlyn matter was unexpected, but well handled I thought. Even Amber might approve.

Yes. Sometimes Bad News Herb can surprise. That's twice recently that he's done something useful.

> And what can I say? I love more Yo in just about anything, so seeing him working with the team again was a real treat.

I'm not sure about keeping him/her around though. Thoughts?

> All in all, a very fun chapter with many delightful scenes (like shrike and SS comparing loot). I look forward to the next one!

I'll attempt to write it this weekend.