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Subj: Re: Brains?
Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 at 04:16:16 pm EDT (Viewed 598 times)
Reply Subj: Re: Brains?
Posted: Sat Jul 19, 2008 at 03:30:47 pm EDT



> > > He needs Liu Xi either (1) carry out a void-related task he has bred her line for many generations to accomplish or (2) birth a child with Danny that will grow up to accomplish the task.
> > For either of those he'd have to send her back home to accomplish it.
>
> Not really, in the plot frame I'm using. However, if you want to go a different way it's your character and this is a round robin so the rest of us would adapt.

If he locks Danny and Liu Xi away in his private dimension, though, they might become angry and rebel. It might be easier if he makes them think it's their idea.


> > > I received your tie-in narrative. Of course, there are also mitigating circumstances to be taken into account. Vinnie and Kerry are victims.
> > Maybe that's why Liu Xi made that promise to herself.
>
> It'll still be a while before that meeting comes into place.

Noted.


> > > There are some flaws in his [Void Scholar's] plans which are not clear to him.
> > Those are things Liu Xi would see, because she believes more in improvisation than a plan.
>
> It's important to build the cracks into the plot early on so the resolution doesn't feel too forced.

It's not like she's going to tell him.