> Lots of good stuff in this chapter, as the heroes do what they do best... mess up perfectly sound plans for ruling the world. Al certainly makes a tough villain to oppose, as not only is he fiendishly clever and pretty damn resourceful, but he knows the heroes' tricks too well. Still, the deck was stacked against him once Dancer got her powers back... probably a hard thing to factor into contingency plans.
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I thought Al and the Librarian would be the most interesting characters to turn "bad" because we could get to see how dangerous they are if they're not playing nicely.
> In any event, I'd definitely not allow Shrike to guard him. Since poster Al was just passing through last time, does this mean you're inclined to leave Al a villain for the time being?
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> It was good to see Dancer in action again, naked or not it's always an impressive sight. It was accompanied by some rather brutal psychoanalysis from our villain. Sarah has a tragic side to her, as all the very best romantic heroines do.
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> I was also happy to see Marie is still about, albeit in a new, more "halfway" existence this time. She's welcome to haunt the lighthouse as long as she likes, although I know her true home is the mansion.
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> And the Lined Up Legion assault on the forces of darkness to close the tale (and rescue Yo!) certainly put a smile on my face. Nice job!
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