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Manga Shoggoth

Member Since: Fri Jan 02, 2004
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Dancer via HH (who also has another Dancer story to post once people have replied to this one)

Subj: Wonderful. Buit I am constrained to point out...
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 at 03:52:32 am EDT (Viewed 333 times)
Reply Subj: Dancer’s Next Land That Common Sense Forgot Adventure Tie-In: “I’d like to be clear that I’m a no-skewer zone, and have been since college.”
Posted: Sat May 31, 2008 at 11:30:36 am EDT


> Doubloon Douglass: Aha! As to myself, I never wanted to be a corsair when I was a youngling, but m’father and his father were corsairs before me and wanted me in the family business. I wanted to be a greengrocer.

You missed a fine oppotunity to use "I wanted to be... a lumberjack!"

...Although it might have skewed the story somewhat.




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