Subj: I do. Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 at 10:21:31 pm EDT
Reply Subj: I don't really think a rewrite is necessary Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 at 07:41:17 pm EDT
> > > She really shouldn't be duped into leading superheroes to their deaths, and he shouldn't be put in grim and gritty battle scenes. > > > > I'll make some adjustments. > >
