Tales of the Parodyverse - I don't really think a rewrite is necessary

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killer shrike

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Subj: I don't really think a rewrite is necessary
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 at 07:41:17 pm EDT

Reply Subj: Hmm. I don't seem to have hit very close to the target with this episode.
Posted: Wed May 14, 2008 at 07:12:32 pm EDT

> > She really shouldn't be duped into leading superheroes to their deaths, and he shouldn't be put in grim and gritty battle scenes.
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> I'll make some adjustments.