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Hatman

Member Since: Thu Jan 01, 1970
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killer shrike

Subj: Come to think of it, I think you said to pencil you in for Chapter 6...
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 at 12:15:50 pm EDT (Viewed 427 times)
Reply Subj: I liked everthing about this story except for the last three sentences. ;)
Posted: Tue Apr 22, 2008 at 06:36:16 am EDT (Viewed 1 times)


> Go Hatty Go! Nice to see the guy flexing his leadership muscles, and be willing to take the hit others deserve.
>

Using the team captain analogy to his leadership style it makes sense.

> I also really liked the way you encapsulated the personalities of the major characters with the rhubarb at the start of the team meeting. Identity Crisis indeed.
> \:\)
>

I know Dream hates that story but I thought it was relevant.

> Now we just the scene where Jay is locked in the brig surrounded by all of his old enemies....
>

Ouch.

~Hat~