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killer shrike

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Visionary

Subj: Re: I mostly agree...
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 03:14:14 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times)
Reply Subj: I mostly agree...
Posted: Sat Apr 12, 2008 at 01:56:58 pm EDT (Viewed 1 times)


> I think they ultimately added a few things that didn't quite work (the mini-sun experiment, and the engagement for MJ, but both were replacements for things that didn't work in the original script, so it was at worst a push in those regards. And on the whole, they strengthened a lot of what was here.
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The mini-sun is a better idea because it elevates the conflict between Spidey and Doc Ock beyond the personal. Superheroes are supposed to do things like save the city from mad scientists.

The John Jameson character would have worked better if he had more screen time. If they made him a cop or a firefighter instead of an Air Force pilot, for example, they could have included a scene where he crossed paths with Peter (or even kept the concept of Spider-Man saving John like he did in the original comics).

> One difference in terms of screentime is definitely with JJJ... he had multiple extra scenes in the script, including one where Spidey snags him up to the roof of the Bugle and they have it out with each other.

Yeah, they should have played the Spidey/JJJ relationship up more (I don't know why they left the scene with Jameson wearing the costume out of the original film. That was 1000x funnier than any of Bruce Cmpbell's shtick). In the end, though, its a great movie, the best of the frnachise, and probably my third favorite superhero film of all time, so I'd say what they did worked.